✎ freedom writers

✎ The Body Part III: let's practice again!

Write a paragraph based on the elements given to you below:-

a) Main idea: Commitment
b) Topic Sentence: Commitment is very important on her part when she becomes my wife. 
c) Controlling Idea I: will likely to run away and leave you.
d) Controlling Idea II: be with you through thick and thin.

p/s: Do not forget the concluding sentence! ;)

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